So my scripts been floating around to various people. I’ve been trying to get some straight forward feedback that will help me improve my script. Here are some quotes about what I’ve written.
“It doesn’t have any jokes.”
“... the characters are very endearing.”
“It’s a very serious topic.”
“Very funny and not at all offensive.”
“I don’t get it.”
“...very funny. I appreciate it's smart humor along with its simple storyline. Not only do I find it comical, but its ability to relate to any kid who has strived for acceptance, not only from their parents, but from others in their culture and environment is what I think makes the nature of your script concrete.”
“I need a description of the house so I can know something about the character.”
“Brilliant idea.”
So... Some mixed responses. I look forward to hearing more of what people think as I get more feedback. So far the people’s opinions I want the most I haven’t been able to get. Hopefully time will tell if this script is worth anything. Until then I’m focusing on producing this soon to be master piece.
All the best people.
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